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Wednesday, June 16 2010

How bellybuttons get in the way of persuasive copywriting

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There’s a saying in French that goes: se prendre pour le nombril du monde. While it truly means to think one is God’s gift to mankind, it would literally translate as acting like the world’s bellybutton.

You’ve certainly met with people like that. I remember a girl I once studied with: a brilliant, committed, straight-A student – and pretty good-looking too. But it feels like she’d start every single sentence with “Me, I…”. “Me, I think the green looks prettier.” “Me, I think this font would be nicer”.

Too many websites and company brochures are written with “Me, I” in mind. Clichés like “the North American leader” and “our established company counts on specialized experts with over 40 year experience” pack a lot less punch that you’d think.

You won’t win clients over with a lengthy monologue about yourself. It’s better to show how you’re listening, how you’re interested, how you understand their needs and how you’re the company best positioned to answer them. There’s a reason why “YOU” is considered a top power word in advertising – it comes right after “FREE”.

Persuasive copywriting stays away from self-centered copy

When writing, the client should always be your focus. “YOU” and “YOUR” establish a dialogue between you and your client. A quick way of checking if copy is sufficiently client-focused is to highlight all words like “YOU” and “YOUR” in red, and all “WE” and “OUR” in green. If there’s a lot of red and little green, it doesn’t look good. Give it a try: even this article follows that principle!

So, what about you? Is your copy about your clients, or about your bellybutton?

Wednesday, May 26 2010

The Art of Storytelling: how to tell your brand story (Part 2/2)

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To read the first part, click here.

Brand storytelling creates value: it’s a subtle form of advertising that creates interest by appealing to your clients’ imagination. Unlike “hard sell” advertising – which shouts and begs for your attention – storytelling makes people want to listen, want to learn more.

Just like there are many great storytellers, from Bob Dylan to Stephen King, there are many ways of telling your brand story.

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Wednesday, May 19 2010

The Art of Storytelling: how to tell your brand story (Part 1/2)

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You might think there’s not much to be said about a soft drinks store. But if you have a few minutes to take a look at Galco’s Soda Pop Stop video presentation, you just might have to drop by next time you’re in Los Angeles.

Details make the magic: glass bottles, the owner’s overflowing enthusiasm, his “perfect granddaddy” looks, unusual flavors (like cucumber cola). Everything blends together to tell the charming story of this unusual shop from around the corner, one that feels true and welcoming.

Small businesses are always looking for ways to compete with larger ones. Galco’s Soda Pop Stop is miles ahead of any local supermarket in its specific niche. He has so much more to offer than cheap soft drinks. His clients can enter a wonderful world of exotic and surprising flavors: his world.

That’s what brand storytelling is about. But how can you leverage that potential?

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Wednesday, May 5 2010

Silver Star Mercedes-Benz: the brochure that stands out

**Winner of a BRONZE Summit Award**

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After successfully rebranding the Silver Star Montréal logo, we’ve designed a high-end brochure that highlights benefits exclusive to Canada’s largest Mercedes-Benz dealership.

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Wednesday, April 28 2010

Fantastic logo for Laval scientastique!

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The Laval scientastique! project was created with the help of multiple local development organizations to promote scientific culture on the Laval island. To this day, the theme was used as part of a series of activities during spring break, but additional ambitious projects are in development. Laval scientastique! aims to become a rallying brand for the local scientific community.

The name was coined to clearly communicate the ideas of Laval and Science, through a distinctive sound and feel. The name brings together all kinds of people: kids, teenagers, families and citizen alike.

The silhouette evokes the idea of accessible science, science that’s part of our daily lives. The character’s multiple components band together to create a greater whole, just like Laval scientastique! was created through the combined efforts of various companies, organizations and government initiatives.

The signature uses two complementary fonts: one being serious, structured and balanced, a reference to the City of Laval’s logo, while the second one is more human, fluid and expressive.

Wednesday, April 21 2010

Behind the colours, you’ll find… The Palais des congrès de Montréal

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Two years have passed, and the advertising platform we designed for the Palais des congrès de Montréal still stands out.

Behind the colours, you’ll find … is a reference to the signature stained glass windows that make the Palais des congrès de Montréal so distinctive. Behind them, you’ll find people of passion, committed to each event’s success. The platform makes it easy to adapt the advertising to any situation: it’s just a matter of filling the blank with whatever the Palais wishes to promote.

The focus point of each ad is the portrait of an employee or partner, posing in front the building’s stained glass windows. Careful structure and transparency support the brand image and overall theme.

Featuring strong design and an easy-to-customize template, this advertising platform helps achieve better production flow throughout the year.

Wednesday, April 7 2010

Parabox: cleanly-defined space

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Parabox, a partner of SIC, produces an innovative modular-panel system for designing clean rooms.

The overall brand image has a clean, sober feel, fitting the industry. The logo shows careful alignments and a stylized “X” representing panel divisions seen from above. The color green represents the product’s environmentally-friendly attributes, the panels being 100% recyclable.

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Wednesday, February 3 2010

Santématique: making health clinics healthier

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The programmers at Logiciels Systhèmes have designed a remarkable software application for the Polyclinique Médicale Concorde, a major health clinic in Laval. After scanning all the doctors’ handwritten information, the software application compiles them to a digital archive. Memos, prescriptions, patient notes, test results: professionals can now browse through all the information by category, date, doctor or specialty.

To market this innovative product on a larger scale, it first needed a solid brand image. And a solid brand image starts with a great name.

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Wednesday, January 13 2010

Design is king at Carré Union

**Winner of a BEST OF SHOW Summit Award**

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To promote its new positioning as Montreal’s true design center, the Carré Union hired us to design a promotional piece meant to reach designers and architects. Competing for the attention of such a demanding audience was no easy task, requiring us to tap into our deepest creative reserves. The result: a massive brochure that showcases 13 merchants’ unique refinement.

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Wednesday, November 25 2009

A shiny new brand image for SIC

Based in the Bromont industrial park, SIC designs and produces clean room equipment and furniture, as well as offering custom industrial solutions.

The company logo had grown outdated and no longer evoked a modern and technology-oriented brand image.

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The new SIC logo evokes the product clearly: stainless steel is a key material when designing cleanroom equipment. The 3D effect suggests a room, or a piece of furniture. The font was chosen for its bold, strong character; something fitting for a detail-driven company that built its success on trust and customer satisfaction.

We also came up with a company tagline, which translates as controlled environment experts. The tagline sums up the company’s expertise nicely: in addition to its vast knowledge of the physical environment, the company truly understands the business environment and key challenges that science and pharmaceutical companies face daily.

Tuesday, September 1 2009

The BONE Structure brand design

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The BONE Structure construction system uses lightweight steel pieces that fit together like a MECCANO construction set. The system makes it possible to build strong, modern houses with distinct flair. Based in Laval, the company is about to launch an aggressive print campaign.

We recently established detailed brand guidelines to make the BONE Structure image as distinctive as its architecture.

Where did we turn to for inspiration?

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Tuesday, June 16 2009

Terra - Source of Inspiration

For 11 years, Céramiques Terra has been offering exclusive ceramics to a demanding clientele.

To polish its service offer and reach designers more effectively, Céramiques Terra underwent the kreative rebranding process and became Terra – source d’inspiration (translating as Source of Inspiration).

The bright red logo features a modern shape, becoming a strong and original brand that stands out on the ceramics market. The shape reminds of a ceramic tile.

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The positioning sentence Source d’inspiration evokes a broader service offer. Countless collections of stylish products and surprising materials make Terra a well of inspiration for its clients.

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Tuesday, May 26 2009

Cavavin: tidying up the cellars!

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Cavavin is a wine cellar manufacturer whose products are sold throughout Canada and the US. Back in 2007, the product offering was confusing: clients and distributors had a hard time making sense of the numerous models and options available. It was time for a clean up.

We reviewed the different cellars and grouped them into three categories. We came up with an evocative name and signature for each, leading to the 2008 launch of three distinct brands:

  • SOBRA for small capacity, silent cellars.
  • URBANIA for entry-level units, featuring a modern look that appeals to the urban crowd.
  • Finally, MAJESTIKA for high-end stainless steel or solid wood cellars, marketed at true wine enthusiasts.

Now that the product offering was clear, it was just a matter of applying the new brand image to the rest of the corporate material.

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Tuesday, May 12 2009

A clean image for Balican

Balican cleans, repairs, and paints exterior home surfaces: siding, doors, windows, patios… The company image needed refinement, and some rebranding work made way for a distinctive brand image.

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The logo’s fleur-de-lys evokes architectural refinement and decoration, and reminds of the spray-gun used to apply the paint. Because the name “Balican” is not very descriptive by itself, we came up with a nominative that presents the service offering more clearly: exterior surface restoration.

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Tuesday, May 5 2009

AREVA T&D and the Treasure of the High Voltage Factory

**Winner of a GOLD Summit Award**

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During Finepoint’s 15th Circuit Breaker Conference (October 2008), AREVA T&D hosted a guided tour of its Charleroi, PA plant. To make the visit more interesting, we came up with a theme that borrowed from Indiana Jones and the Kingdom of the Crystal Skull (which had been very popular that summer).

Distinctive imagery, where jungle and ancient Mayan structures covered high voltage equipment, added a sense of adventure to the day. The theme was adapted on numerous items…

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Thursday, February 12 2009

10 points to see how good that new name is

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A product (or company) name is a sizable chunk of its brand image. You’ll hear it every time people discuss the brand. Coming up with an evocative name is often a haphazard process: conversations feel like they’re on a merry-go-round, opinions vary, and the group adopts what seems like an acceptable compromise from the majority. How can you be sure you’ve made the right decision?

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Tuesday, February 10 2009

Meet the “Dialectizer”

How would your tagline sound like in “jive”? How about in hacker-speak? Or by a Swiss chef? Spice up your day by submitting your company’s tagline to the Dialectizer.

Cavavin’s jive tagline packs quite a punch: « Yo’ wine-keepuh’ »!